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A new dayA new day, a new light, a new love.I look up at the cloudless night sky above me, and wonder if there are angles watching over me who have cleared the sky just as a dark cloud had been lifted from my soul. I see the first of the evening stars beginning to shine their beautiful comforting pale blue light down on our beloved planet, and breath a sigh of contentment as i contemplate my future which suddenly looks much brighter. A thought which is accompanied by the particularly bright full moon which baths the urban streets in its milky white light, combining with the street lamps to banish the night and darkness forever. I smile, a warm glow bubbling up from my heart as i look to my side at my closest friend: the wonderful woman who walked through the darkness with me and now standing in the light, i smile at the thought our love is no longer forbidden. After the heavy rain of the last few days, and the emotional black cloud that has loomed over me for so long, this moment , this
To fly to fallTo fly, To fallBy SoulDragonWithFlowOn the edge of oblivion, still in space.In a concrete playground overlooking the sea,There stood an angel, free for eternity.And just to say, that urban angel was me.I felt the flow as a stood on the ledge.For to fly is how my wind calls,To live a life on the edge,But to never, ever fall.I remember my salvation.Or was it my damnation ?I learnt to fly without hesitationNow I were my uniform as an abomination.I felt the flow as a stood on the ledge.For to fly is how my wind calls,To live a life on the edge,But to never, ever fall.The flow carried me, my brethren at my side.We are never seen, but we never hide.To run free, traveling with no guide.Now I look inside myself, and find my soul has died.I felt the flow as a stood on the ledge.For to fly is how my wind calls,To live a life on the edge,But to never, ever fall.I remember still that day so well,Fused into my sprit like the memory from hell.I still shiver when I
The Familiar Stranger Chapter 2Chapter 2 - The Improbable Past- By SoulDragonWithFlowAs the four of them walked through the forest, Dash leading the way out in front, Raiko's mind turned to his life in the last few years, the years before his exile. In the years that followed, he had been through hell to be saved by an angel, but more on that, crashing into Dash again, (quite literally), had brought back an awful lot of memories; both happy and painful. Dash represented his old life; a life Raiko was desperate to forget. He walked along next to Raven, with Crystal lagging a little way behind. Raiko didn't look at either of them however, but simply stared into the middle distance, lost in his own thoughts."I suppose it must be awkward seeing Dash again after all these years eh Raiko?" Raven commented. He had been watching him for a while with great interest, staring at his absent expression and trying to guess what he might be thinking. Raiko snapped out of his daze and considered Raven for a few seconds an
The Familiar Stranger Chapter 1Chapter 1 - Unwelcome ReunionBy - SoulDragonWithFlowUnder the cover of starlit darkness, a lone spirit stood on the edge of oblivion, the silver moonlight reflecting off his inky black scales. The young male dragon considered his surroundings through closed eyes, his sharp hunter senses picking up tiny movements from the weary woodland creatures around him. Breathing steadily, his sharp hearing picked up the faint hoot of a stealthy barn owl hunting a tiny rodent in the distance and the smell of fresh water from the nearby river soothed his sinuses as the dense, cool, midnight air filled his lungs. Raiko felt his heart beginning to race in anticipation of what was to come. He thought of how long it had been since he had done this, the events which had grounded him in the first place, and of his beloved Twilight who had revived his broken spirit, allowing his soul to shine once again. A revival which now meant Raiko was free to do what felt most natural to him, without the pain