Please sign up
or login to post a critique.
The Familiar Stranger Chapter 7Chapter 7 - Raven's Suspicion By - SoulDragonWithFlow"Raven? RAVEN!" Raven suddenly snapped out of his day dream and realised that Rose had obviously just asked him something."Oh I'm sorry Rose. What did you say?" Rose sighed and repeated her question."What's the deal with you and Crystal?" Her voice, much to Raven's surprise, didn't have a trace of anger."Oh… Err...No deal I guess. We are friends, that's just about it." He stammered."Crystal?" Twilight asked, who had not yet been introduced to her."The… Rather good looking… purple dragoness Raven, Dash, and Mistyte came with." Lucia said. Twilights mind flashed back to the day before, and what she had seen in the forest. Crystal… how did she know that name?"Ya, I think she went swimming or something this morning, but like I said, we are just friends." Raven wondered if he had just given himself away by being too persistent of their friendship."Really? Your telling me you've known her all thi
Wyldlife Commission - Chapter 1WyldLifeOriginal story concept by – Wyldfire7Written by - SoulDragonWithFlowChapter 1The bright morning sky was suddenly filled with a deafening roar that echoed throughout the mountains in the distance, making the million tiny creatures beneath the Forest canopy flee in fear for their tiny woodland homes within the Earth itself. Not that this would have saved them however, for the sound that had made the very ground shake in fear had come from a young airborne, male Dragon who had suddenly found himself unexpectedly in airborne combat. The entire morning sky, was suddenly lit ablaze as he unleashed the full force of his blue, hot, fiery breath directly at his attacker. The weird thing was, the young male wasn't even sure how he had gotten himself into this fight, or even who or what his attacker was. One minute he was enjoying a quiet pleasant flight over the Forests of Shialk, the next, he was suddenly locked in aerial combat, adrenaline shock and rage racing through his system.
The Familiar Stranger Chapter 6Chapter 6 - Mistyte's New FamilyBy - SoulDragonWithFlowTwilight's eyes tore open as she shot up in bed, heart racing, vision still blurry and head pounding. Her nerves relaxed however when she looked around and realised where she was: her bedroom. She was in her bedroom. It had all been a dream! Just a horrible nightmare. With a sigh of relief, Twilight collapsed onto her back in bed, heart still racing and breathing heavily. The feeling of still being able to breathe was still a relief to her after the image and entirely real feeling of drowning and she found herself only being able to think about how good it felt to be able to breathe for several long minutes before her heart and breathing finally slowed down to a comfortable rate.Her body however was suddenly fully awake again however when she picked up the strange sound of voices conversing downstairs; two of them."We weren't expecting anyone today were we?" Twilight thought to herself. She could just about