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Rebirth - Chapter 6Chapter 6Behind an unassuming door, a peaceful silence filled an unempty room. The first of the Sun's, gentle, early morning rays, penetrated clear glass, before passing through a gap between half-drawn curtains and finding their way to the skin of a blissfully relaxed, and almost unconscious dragoness, huddled deep in the arms of her mate. The orangey, early morning sun, slowly and gently began to heat her skin, and stir her from her blissful sleep. Although unwilling to return to reality, leaving behind her perfect world of heavenly dreams, induced by a night of romantic intimacy with her mate, she wanted to see his face again, to feel his real skin against hers. To begin another day, spending real time with the one she loved, and not merely dreaming about him. As her mind was slowly dragged into reality, memories of intimacy and ecstasy began to flood back from the night before. A gentle, blissful smile crept across her face. She began shuffling her body and limbs, encouraging them
Rebirth Synopsis and BackgroundRebirth Background and SynopsisOkay, first the basic storyline and Synopsis (kind of the sort of thing you may find on the back of DVDs)Have you ever had something stolen from you? Have you ever thought you have everything, only to discover you have nothing? Have you ever been offered help that you knew you just didn't deserve? But most of all, have you ever been in love?The answer is yes to all these questions for Raiko, a young, black male Dragon, incredibly strong in mind body and spirit. One day, Raiko finds not only badly injured, but also chained and suppressed by the Dragon elders, unfairly taken to be an enemy and a threat to the settlement's inhabitants. Although he is soon released, Raiko does not one bit wish to stay in the peaceful village, as he's been living in exile for years, due to a dark past that has left him with nothing. Twilight however, a young blue beauty with a heart of gold, quickly develops strong feelings for the troubled Raiko and feels can not only heal
Rebirth - Chapter 5Chapter 5She had her front paws around her mouth, in total shock of what he had just told her. Even though she had partly covered up her own face, anybody could clearly see just how much pain she was in, and how upset she was. Her eyes though, her eyes said it all: Mistrust, sorrow, but most of all, heartbreak. "You see Twilight, sometimes you can't help people. And more to the point, sometimes they just don't deserve it. I'm sorry Twilight. I never meant to hurt you." Raiko finally finished. He hated himself for ever allowing Twilight to help him. I especially regretted ever allowing himself to lose control and telling such a kindhearted person about his dark past. He certainly didn't feel better for it. All he could think was "well done Raiko, you've managed to succeed in shattering a second soul. On top of that, you've destroyed the faith and innocence of an incredibly kindhearted dragoness. Is there no limit to your destructive power? And how dare you accept help! Especially from
It's Christmas Time Again - PoemWhen it's Christmas again,Sleigh bells ring, and children cheer.The Mothers hang stockings, and the Dads drink the beer!When it's Christmas again,The lights go on, and the snow starts to fall,for everyone loves, to answer the Christmas call.Good dreams breathe, and stars burn bright.Share the food, see the love in every bite.When it's Christmas again.Peace on earth, goodwill to your neighbour,And enjoy the time without labour,when it's Christmas time again,The wind turns cold, but hearts remain warm,You fall asleep, and hope Santa comes by Dawn.Exchanging gifts, sharing the love.Wrapping up warm, and finding your missing glove.When it's Christmas time again.For me, it is not the presents, the snow or the lights,or even the food or snowball fights.It is simply spending time with the people I care about,and you are the sleigh in my snow, have no doubt.When it's Christmas time againFor being with you, brings to my face, a happy tear.And like want is your smile this